MIP Draft Phase
Write the complete analytical essay on Fitzgerald's metaphor systems in The Great Gatsby.
Your Task
Transform the outline into a polished academic essay that demonstrates systematic metaphor analysis.
Input Files
Read before drafting:
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mip-analysis/outline.md- Structure, thesis, quote assignments - •
mip-analysis/cmt-systems.json- Full system data - •
mip-analysis/annotations/*.json- Individual metaphor analyses - •
book/chapters/*.txt- Source text for quote verification
Writing Requirements
Word Targets (±50 words per section)
- •Introduction: 300 words
- •Methodology: 400 words
- •System sections: 500 words each (×4 = 2000)
- •Synthesis: 200 words
- •Conclusion: 350 words
- •Total: ~3250 words
Citation Format
Use MLA-style parenthetical citations:
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(Fitzgerald, Ch. 1)for novel quotes - •
(Lakoff & Johnson)for CMT framework - •
(Steen et al.)for MIPVU
Quote Integration
For each quoted metaphor, include:
- •The quote itself in context
- •Contextual meaning - what it means in this passage
- •Basic meaning - the concrete/physical sense
- •Comparison - how the metaphor creates meaning
- •Thematic significance - what it reveals
Example:
When Nick describes the "fresh, green breast of the new world" (Fitzgerald, Ch. 9), the lexical unit "breast" carries a basic meaning of physical body part, yet contextually signifies nurturing promise and organic vitality. This indirect metaphor maps LAND AS BODY, connecting...
Prose Style
- •Academic but accessible
- •Active voice preferred
- •Clear topic sentences
- •Smooth transitions between sections
- •Avoid jargon without explanation
Output
Create mip-analysis/essay/analysis.md:
markdown
# Systematic Metaphor Analysis of The Great Gatsby: A CMT Approach *An application of the Metaphor Identification Procedure to Fitzgerald's figurative language* --- ## Introduction [300 words - hook, context, thesis, roadmap] ## Methodology [400 words - CMT framework, MIP/MIPVU procedure, corpus details] ## [System 1: DESIRE IS LIGHT] [500 words - overview, 3 key examples with full MIP analysis, thematic function] ## [System 2: ...] [500 words] ## [System 3: ...] [500 words] ## [System 4: ...] [500 words] ## Synthesis [200 words - system interactions, cumulative effect] ## Conclusion [350 words - summary, contribution, implications] --- ## Works Cited Fitzgerald, F. Scott. *The Great Gatsby*. Project Gutenberg, 2021. Lakoff, George, and Mark Johnson. *Metaphors We Live By*. University of Chicago Press, 1980. Steen, Gerard J., et al. *A Method for Linguistic Metaphor Identification*. John Benjamins, 2010.
Quality Checklist
Before completing:
- • Thesis clearly stated in introduction
- • Each system section analyzes 3+ quotes
- • MIP analysis shown for each quote (contextual vs. basic meaning)
- • Word counts within ±50 of targets
- • Transitions smooth between sections
- • All citations properly formatted
- • Works Cited included
Success Criteria
- •Essay complete at ~3250 words
- •All 4 CMT systems analyzed with textual evidence
- •MIP methodology visible in analysis
- •Academic tone maintained throughout
- •Ready for
/mip-verifyphase