Story Check Skill
Invocation Triggers
Apply this skill when:
- •Evaluating a screenplay draft
- •Identifying story weaknesses
- •Preparing for rewrites
- •Validating story fundamentals before submission
The 12 Story Questions
Here are twelve great questions you should ask yourself about your script/story while you are developing it. You should actually chart it out.
Question 1: Story Elements
What are the elements of my story?
- •What is my story's concept?
- •What genre is my story?
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CONCEPT: ___________________________________ GENRE: ___________________________________
Question 2: Message
What do I want to say with my script or story?
- •The state of the world?
- •Relationships?
- •Governments?
- •Religions?
- •Life in general?
- •People?
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THEME/MESSAGE: ___________________________________
Question 3: Audience Reaction
How will audiences or readers react to my story?
- •Interesting?
- •Believable? Is it a true story?
- •Credible?
- •Compelling?
| Criterion | Rating (1-5) | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| Interesting | ||
| Believable | ||
| Credible | ||
| Compelling |
Question 4: Beginning
Where does my story begin?
- •What is the setup?
- •Is the protagonist in a crisis?
- •Have you established your world? The rules?
- •The restrictions?
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SETUP: ___________________________________ WORLD RULES: ___________________________________
Question 5: Ending
Where does my story end?
- •What is the outcome or resolution? And why?
- •Do you answer any and all questions presented?
- •Did you fulfill the premise of the story?
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RESOLUTION: ___________________________________ QUESTIONS ANSWERED: [ ] Yes [ ] Partial [ ] No PREMISE FULFILLED: [ ] Yes [ ] No
Question 6: Rising Tensions
Are there rising tensions?
- •Are there surprises?
- •How does the conflict escalate?
- •Is there a climax?
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SURPRISE COUNT: ___ ESCALATION PATTERN: ___________________________________ CLIMAX: ___________________________________
Question 7: Characters
Who are my characters?
- •Are they likable?
- •Interesting? Unique or different?
- •Bigger than life?
- •Will an audience care about them?
| Character | Likable | Interesting | Unique | Care Factor |
|---|---|---|---|---|
Question 8: Protagonist
What or who is my protagonist like?
- •Can audiences empathize with them?
- •What do they want?
- •What are their goals in life? Needs?
- •What's at stake for them?
- •Are they tied to the problem they face?
- •Are they in a position of no turning back?
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EMPATHY: [ ] Strong [ ] Moderate [ ] Weak WANT: ___________________________________ NEED: ___________________________________ STAKES: ___________________________________ POINT OF NO RETURN: Page ___
Question 9: Motivation
What are my characters' motivations?
- •Are these motivations shown?
- •Justified or unjustified?
- •Built into the story?
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PROTAGONIST MOTIVATION: ___________________________________ SHOWN ON SCREEN: [ ] Yes [ ] No JUSTIFIED: [ ] Yes [ ] No BUILT INTO STORY: [ ] Yes [ ] No
Question 10: Antagonist
Who or what is the antagonist in my story?
- •Why are they trying to stop your protagonist?
- •Is the antagonist a worthy foe?
- •What drives them?
- •What do they want or need?
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ANTAGONIST: ___________________________________ MOTIVATION: ___________________________________ WORTHY FOE: [ ] Yes [ ] No WANT: ___________________________________
Question 11: Over-Explanation
Do I over-explain my story?
- •Is everything spelled out too clearly?
- •Is the setup "messy" and too busy?
- •Do events get explained or unfold dramatically?
- •Do too many key events take place off screen?
| Issue | Present? | Page(s) |
|---|---|---|
| Over-explanation | ||
| Messy setup | ||
| Told not shown | ||
| Key events off screen |
Question 12: Believability
If my story and characters are fictitious, can I now believe that they are real?
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BELIEVABILITY SCORE: ___/10 AREAS TO IMPROVE: ___________________________________
Story Check Summary Template
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## Story Check Summary: [TITLE] ### PASS/FAIL Assessment | Question | Status | Notes | |----------|--------|-------| | 1. Elements | | | | 2. Message | | | | 3. Audience Reaction | | | | 4. Beginning | | | | 5. Ending | | | | 6. Rising Tensions | | | | 7. Characters | | | | 8. Protagonist | | | | 9. Motivation | | | | 10. Antagonist | | | | 11. Over-Explanation | | | | 12. Believability | | | ### Critical Issues 1. ___________________________________ 2. ___________________________________ 3. ___________________________________ ### Recommended Actions 1. ___________________________________ 2. ___________________________________ 3. ___________________________________ ### Overall Assessment [ ] Ready for submission [ ] Needs minor revisions [ ] Needs significant rewrite [ ] Fundamental story issues
Validation Checklist
- • All 12 questions answered honestly
- • Issues documented with specific page references
- • Action items prioritized
- • Overall assessment reflects reality